Hell's Mist: Alan Du

Da Man · (This post was last modified: July 30, 2012 9:17:22am by Da Man.)

Tutorial coming soon, maybe a GFX Tutorial section.

I don't know if this is good or bad. Rate out of 10/10 honestly, with constructive criticism, thanks!

Made in C4D and Photoshop, hope you like it! I call it the Hell's Mist because of the colour.

Clearer version:
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monkey · July 29, 2012 2:44:56pm

Can't see the A

. 8.5/10

abcywe · July 29, 2012 3:17:01pm

Can't really see 7/10 :L

Da Man · July 29, 2012 3:23:08pm

All right then, added a clearer version XD.

abcywe · July 29, 2012 3:30:51pm

8/10 Now I can see it better :).

charmtrainee · July 29, 2012 8:48:23pm

The remade one is 9/10

Jeffrey0 · July 29, 2012 8:55:09pm

First One: Would've been good if it weren't for the unclear A. 8/10
Second One: Much Better. 9/10

~~Hdawg55555~~ · July 30, 2012 5:27:35am

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jacktheking · July 30, 2012 6:49:23am

To me i like 1St one more then 2Nd one.
The background match the text.The background is unclear if we use a clear text then it wont be nice.

monkey · July 30, 2012 8:21:35am

9/10 :)

IntrepidMisfortune · July 30, 2012 8:58:48am

The smudging is cut off, never a good idea. I would say use more then one layer of smudging, with a few different colours. With the effect you have here i would say use dark colours with a low saturation.

RIor · July 30, 2012 9:55:28am

7/10 with back
9/10 without back

RyuRan447 · August 02, 2012 11:18:40am

Its a bit too dark... 8.75/10

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