Warrior Cats :: HeroClan (Review + Comments)

lilpikachu313 · December 10, 2013 12:29:59am

Okay, so update... Mizuki is a golden she-cat who recently went to her other Twolegs' territory. (Camping)

Neko, her best friend, and the next door's housefolk, tries to find a way for her to go to the wild. Neko is a brown and white Siamese Cat. At this point, you can see some of Mizuki's personality and thoughts about Ricky-San, a house cat that lives with some old Twolegs.

Mizuki's longing for the wild is devouring her every instinct to stay, little by little... I wonder which instinct will take over? What new characters will I bring? Who is this Ricky-San? (Please Add Ideas, Critiques, and Comments Here!)

Shimmerstar1161 · December 10, 2013 12:30:59am

I LOVE warriors, so I'm excited to see how this turns out! =D Can I be a character in this story?

lilpikachu313 · December 10, 2013 12:35:08am

What do you mean? If you mean like you want to suggest a character, then sure! If you want to help me post the fanfic, then yes since I can't be on forums 24/7/365. XD

Shimmerstar1161 · December 10, 2013 12:39:48am

I meant suggest a character. If you need someone else to also post the fanfic then I can help, but I just meant suggest a character. =3

lilpikachu313 · December 10, 2013 12:42:49am

Lol. Okay, so what do you want the character to be? Shimmerstar?

Shimmerstar1161 · December 10, 2013 12:44:18am

Lol, yes. What else? XD I love the character Shimmerstar. =P

lilpikachu313 · December 10, 2013 12:57:40am

Erk. Well, can you PM her kittypet/rogue name, then warrior name? I wanted this to be slightly like a BloodClan story. Slightly.

Shimmerstar1161 · December 10, 2013 1:00:04am

Ooh, that would be cool! Okay, I'll do that.

lilpikachu313 · December 10, 2013 3:32:52am

I feel like writing another chapter, but don't want to miss out on RolePlaying. X3

Shimmerstar1161 · December 12, 2013 2:24:20am

I LOVE the chapter! It's sad, but I'm glad you introduced Shimmer. Still, it's sad. =(

BlueLink9001 · December 12, 2013 2:31:59am

I never read the book, though when I was on Roblox, I used to do Warrior cats(Is that what its called?) RPs, I was usually Riverclan, though then I went to that one clan, Windclan, i think it was called, So could I be in the story too? I'll just say my name, gender and age and appearance, I'll let you do the rest

Name: Yuffie
Gender: Female
Age: 3(Human years, 18 i think in Cat years)
Appearance: She has yellowish eyes, and a nice mix of Black, Orange and brown on her.
Rank: Kit (Well, she acts like she is a kitten)

lilpikachu313 · December 13, 2013 1:08:08am

Okay, I'll include her... I might get around to it next week if Shimmer doesn't, do it before me. =P

BlueLink9001 · December 13, 2013 1:18:54am

okay :3

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