Battle On!

DarkVortex · (This post was last modified: March 12, 2012 12:24:04pm by DarkVortex.)

Theme:Anime
Size:Any
Participants:2(With Me)
Deadline:When Both The Participants has submitted

~~harmony~~ · (This post was last modified: March 12, 2012 3:40:40am by harmony.)

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DarkVortex · March 12, 2012 12:24:33pm

See above i edited!

~~harmony~~ · March 12, 2012 3:38:17pm

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~~harmony~~ · March 13, 2012 4:11:33am

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DarkVortex · March 13, 2012 5:06:39am

Here's Mine:

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But Wheres The Judge?

~~harmony~~ · March 13, 2012 3:41:43pm

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joeysparky234 · March 13, 2012 5:09:31pm

ill judge :P

~~harmony~~ · March 14, 2012 3:27:40am

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~~harmony~~ · March 25, 2012 3:43:25pm

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joeysparky234 · March 25, 2012 3:55:32pm

Oh sorry :L hmm

Darkvortext: hmm, the background don't really go with the render. Its like if you just slapped a render on to a background. The text don't fit in try other colours and closer to the render. Also the render should take up 1/4 of the canvas, you have so much space. So 3/10

Harmony: Nice the render fits in with the background. Is he like Cupid? The text fits in really good. There maybe ways to make it better but as Intrepid. So 7/10

Harmony wins congrats

Antichrist · March 26, 2012 6:30:52pm

Sorry for being late and not seeing this but I'll judge it.
DarkVortex
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The render placement is nice, and the background colors work. The only thing is you have no sense of building up the signature, ie: the render doesn't blender, there's no real atmosphere, text doesn't fit. Check out more tutorials (I suggest watching Hybridon's as he's a great GFX artist)
Overall score: 2/10.

Harmony
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The render placement works, however, the effects just seem like you placed stock on top of stock and didn't erase anything. I can see what looks like a ground texture in the sky. :x When using textures be sure to erase what isn't needed over areas where it may stand out too much. The text doesn't really fit well as it's too large and almost creates another focal. When using text make sure to keep the rule of thirds in mind and place it near your render or main focal. You also need to work on setting the atmosphere and blending the render into the picture.
Overall score: 4/10

Ratings may be harsh but I'm a little more experienced and don't really like sugarcoating things.
The winner is Harmony, of course I can't edit the main battle topic so I'll let Oscar know and let him handle it.

~~harmony~~ · March 30, 2012 1:12:13am

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IntrepidMisfortune · March 30, 2012 4:32:32pm

Points have been updated
congrats harmony
good effort darkvortex

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